9月24日雅思动态图范文:英国不同年龄群女性生育率

9月24日雅思动态图范文:英国不同年龄群女性生育率

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the changes in UK’s birth rate for women in 6 different age groups from 1973 to 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

注：图形根据考场回忆绘制，具体细节或有出入。

【图形分类】

动态图

【题目解析】

图表给出的是生育率的变化，也叫作fertility rates，是统计每一千个女性中会生育多少个孩子的数据。注意并不是百分比，而是千分比。

在图中可以发现，如果按照变化趋势，30-35，20-25以及35-39总体是下降的，而25-30以及under 20是上升的，40 and above则是基本稳定。从数据大小来看，35-39的数据始终是最高的，而40 and above则始终是最低的。

【写作思路】

开头段：转述题目

总结：在35-39，25-30和20以下的女性在2008年相比于其他组有更高的生育率，尤其是25-30和20以下这两个组，是唯二数值上升的组。

主体段1：35-39的女性有最高的生育率，数值从80每1000下降到70。30-35和20-25岁的女性的生育率也下降，一个是显著下降一个是少量下降。

主体段2：25-30和20以下的女性在1973年的生育大概是58和35每1000，排名第三和第五，但是都快速上升成为第二和第三名。40岁以上的女性最不太可能生育，数值始终最低并且稳定在10%。

【参考范文】

The line graph illustrates how the fertility rates changed by age groups during 35 years from 1973 to 2008.

Overall,compared with other age groups,women ages 35-39,25-30 and under 20 had higher fertility rates in 2008,and the latter two were also the only groups that experienced a rising trend in their figures.

Specifically,women ages 35-39 always had the highest rates,yet declining from about 80 to 70 per 1000 women despite some fluctuation in the period.The decreasing trend could also be seen in the groups of 30-35 and 20-25,with a significant and a slight drop respectively to 40‰and 30‰.

However,for women ages 25-30 and under 20,there were approximately 58 and 35 births per 1000 women in 1973,ranking the third and fifth position.After a slight drop,the figures went up sharply to 65‰and 60‰,becoming the second and third highest in the end.It is notable that women over 40 years old were least likely to give birth,with the lowest rate stabilizing at 10‰over the 35 years.

(180 words)

【语言积累】

Fertility rate n.生育率

Women ages 35-39此处ages是较为常见的表示某年龄段女性的说法

Give birth生孩子

Despite尽管

Rank排名

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